Tuesday, November 30, 2010

Persuasive Project Topic Request

After reviewing the Voxopop discussion, I would like to persuade people to college, ag feild or sports. You may listen to my class’s discussion here.

Monday, November 29, 2010

First Persuasive Paragraph

Students should not be given free cell phones. If all students were given cell phones for free instead of earning it themselves. They will take it for granted, the privileges that come along with owning a cell phone. They will not have concern of it being confiscated if being seen using it in the classroom setting. Also the students who are just given cell phones do not work as hard as the students who actually work to get their own cell phones. This is an unfair advantage for students who just sit in their homes and do nothing to search for a job. If students are just given everything, this is enabling them to be lazy and rely on people to provide them with the things that they want for the rest of their life.

Monday, October 25, 2010

The Husband's Point of View

At the period of time when my wife was invited to ball but she had nothing to wear  but rags to wear, so she asked me if I can buy her a dress that cost 400 frank’s . So after I thought about getting her dress I decided to give her the money that I was going to use to buy and new rifle so she can buy her a new dress for the the ball. She was still complaining because she did not have any jewelry to wear to the ball but i mentioned that she can wear flowers but she said that she did not want to look poor so she had to ask her friend to use a expensive necklace.  and she lost it so we spent 10 years of our life paying it of so she did not know that  my wife had lost her necklace, which we ended paying way more money for it then expected.

Wednesday, October 20, 2010

"The Interlopers" Alternate Ending

They heard something coming toward them, they thought that they were hearing their men coming to help and get them out from under the tree that had pinned them down on the ground.  Instead of there men coming to get them it was a pack of wolves, Which was something that neither of them did not expect, now they noticed that they were in a life or death situation, While they were struggling to try and free themselves they heard another noise that sounded like feet steeping on branches, as soon as they heard the noise they started to shout for help. When all of that was  happening, they saw the  biggest wolf which looked like the leader of the pack, and then they noticed that the wolf and its pack was getting closer and closer at what looked like full speed.It was about six feet away the pack when they leaped into the air when there men shout the wolves out of the air, but it was to late for Ulrick. The biggest wolf snapped at him and caught his throat and tore it opened. The wolf was on top of his body destroying it, when one of his men shot the wolf and blow off it’s head. Then all of the wolves were dead. After that one of Ulrick’s men his gun to Georg’s head.  BOOM!!!

Tuesday, September 21, 2010

roger

Respectful


Always said yes M’am to adults

Obedient

Listens to all the lady said.

Greedy

He tried to snatch a pocket book

Eager

all he wanted to do was just leave

Relived

he finally got to leave the lady's house