Thursday, December 9, 2010

Surprising Ending

The end of the story was funny to me because it was ridiculously ironic. How it was ironic, it was ironic by the woman cutting her hair to bye a chain for her husbands pocket watch. also that his husband got her combs and he sold his watch to get it for her because she has been wanting them for a long time and now she can not use them. Love can get you to sell the most valuable thing to you.
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  1. Genonna Love BlogDecember 9, 2010 at 8:10 PM

    Why so heartless Pablo? when you get a girlfriend or a wife you will do the same.

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  2. Michaels blogDecember 9, 2010 at 8:30 PM

    Petey Pablo, you need a longer paragraph! It is about 80 to 85 words. Make it longer and go over what you wrote.

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  3. ~Bree~December 10, 2010 at 9:17 AM

    wow Pablo... yUr fUNNY. you wrote buy wrong!:p and yur post is a little too short miJo.. anyways good job. at least you did it:)

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  4. andrewDecember 10, 2010 at 9:34 AM

    Yeah good job little man!! But like everyone else said you should go back and proof read your paragraph also add 20 to 30 more words cause your paragrpah is to short but good job anyway.

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  5. JenniDecember 13, 2010 at 10:41 PM

    Nice job nice work, keep up the good work!!!!

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