Wednesday, October 20, 2010

"The Interlopers" Alternate Ending

They heard something coming toward them, they thought that they were hearing their men coming to help and get them out from under the tree that had pinned them down on the ground.  Instead of there men coming to get them it was a pack of wolves, Which was something that neither of them did not expect, now they noticed that they were in a life or death situation, While they were struggling to try and free themselves they heard another noise that sounded like feet steeping on branches, as soon as they heard the noise they started to shout for help. When all of that was  happening, they saw the  biggest wolf which looked like the leader of the pack, and then they noticed that the wolf and its pack was getting closer and closer at what looked like full speed.It was about six feet away the pack when they leaped into the air when there men shout the wolves out of the air, but it was to late for Ulrick. The biggest wolf snapped at him and caught his throat and tore it opened. The wolf was on top of his body destroying it, when one of his men shot the wolf and blow off it’s head. Then all of the wolves were dead. After that one of Ulrick’s men his gun to Georg’s head.  BOOM!!!

5 comments:

  1. wow! very bad language, your going to get a fat goose egg. haha fix it!

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  2. Wowzerz Pablo....nice ending. No coment on the language.

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  3. Horrible language, well it was a good post.

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  4. You are crazy haha good job though

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