The most memorable time in my life is when my adopted father and i drove form Washington down here to California. It is the most memorable thing that ever happened because if I did not i probably would not have met most of my bio family . I am happy and sad that I came down here but mostly happy then sad because it is jest another opportunity. The sad part of it was jest that i did not get to say goodbye to anyone. In the end of it all I like how it ended because another and better opportunity for me to grow.
You did fine but there is a couple double spaces that you need to fix.
ReplyDeleteI learn some things about you, you spelled "just" wrong, check your spelling and reread your pargraph.
ReplyDeleteI also learned something from you you have a sweet side to you. By the way you should do your homework if you want to play football keep up with your blog
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