Thursday, September 29, 2011

"Two Kinds" Jing-Mei's Shoes Paragraph


If someone was pushing me to become a prodigy piano player, I would feel mad, angry, and volatile. I do not like being forced to do things that are ridiculous. I would react by disagreeing. I would not do any of the work that I was told to do. I would totally sabotage myself by faking an injury. I would pretend that I hit the wall and broke my knuckles. I would bandage up my hands so they would look swollen. The pressure to become a prodigy would harm me because it would not be beneficial to my mental health.

1 comment:

  1. Wow! I guess you really would not like to be forced to play piano. Why wouldn't you just talk to your parent? By the way, the format of this paragraph is very clear.

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