Readers, which of the following should I write a business letter about? Please add your comments below.
Potential Recipient: Tia Moore, Director, San Pasqual Academy
Request: I am writing to request that students can go on self-pass before the age of 16.
Explanation: Students should be allowed to go on self-pass at a younger age in order to have a normal teenage experience.
Potential Recipient: Chip Kelly, Head Football Coach, University of Oregon
Request: I would like to visit your campus. During my visit, I would like to observe a football practice, attend a class, and stay in a dorm with one of your players. I want to learn about campus life at the University of Oregon.
Explanation: I am a high school football player and am interested in attending your school.
Potential Recipient: Lane Kiffin, Head Football Coach, University of Southern California
Request: I would like to visit your campus. During my visit, I would like to observe a football practice, attend a class, and stay in a dorm with one of your players. I want to learn about campus life at the University of Southern California.
Explanation: I am a high school football player and am interested in attending your school.
that looks fimalliar
ReplyDeleteThat is a nice looking business letter, but I will have to disagree with younger students getting self passes because they are imature.
ReplyDeleteNice buisness letter, and format.
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