Dog Star" Chronological Order of Flashback Paragraph

Dog Star the story would have been effective  in chronological order but it would not be the same because it would have been a vary predictable story. It would be a good story in chronological order because then it would build up to the climax of the story and that would of been the earthquake on the moon. It also would not be as good as the original because you would not get the same point of view.