Monday, September 20, 2010

A Letter

Dear:ms Jones




I am 25 years old now and I just wanted to thank you for what you did 10 years ago because I came to a realization after that happened know that i did not have to steel to get what I want or other illegal ways to get what i want. So I appreciate the influence you impacted in my life. know I am in college and getting a couple of degrees.So thanks again for what you did I needed it.





sincerely

Roger

4 comments:

  1. Poor Roger! He is "in college and getting a couple of degrees," but he can't write a letter correctly!

    Pablo, have someone proofread your work before you post it.

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  2. Hey Pablo I just wanted to let you know that you need to make sure you spell check your post. Remember it is very important so Ms. Priester will give you good grades as well as Ms. Raquel scence she does the cheking.

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  3. Pablo your post is really good but you have some mistakes in in the post but other than that it's okay.

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  4. Good job, but remember to check your spelling and grammer.

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